[ creativity is no guarantee of productivity. in fact, frequently the opposite
Quite right. She usually does though - he manages to have an odd sense of both surprise and a total lack of the same. She's close again, warm against his own warmth, and then kissing, and he lets his eyes slide shut to appreciate it, he's tired, and she's perfect, and he wants to remember it. Her words are warm when they hit his skin and patter across his face, and he has the hints of a smile behind his lips. ] Better. [ Similarly low, quiet, husky, not breaking the moment. ]
i question the words 'great', 'life', and 'choices' in that sentence
Quite right. She usually does though - he manages to have an odd sense of both surprise and a total lack of the same. She's close again, warm against his own warmth, and then kissing, and he lets his eyes slide shut to appreciate it, he's tired, and she's perfect, and he wants to remember it. Her words are warm when they hit his skin and patter across his face, and he has the hints of a smile behind his lips. ] Better. [ Similarly low, quiet, husky, not breaking the moment. ]